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DAY 5
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🎬 情境故事

在面試中,很常被問到:「請分享一個你最有成就感的專案。」

以前我會很沒有架構地說,但是後來就變得很像在亂聊。偶然發現了 STAR 法則,就來試試看套用在回答這個問題。

今天的目標:用 STAR 四個步驟(情境 → 任務 → 行動 → 成果 → 成就感原因)練習 1 分鐘分享。

🤖 Config Prompt

[Config]
- Day: Day5 – Sharing Your Most Accomplished Project
- Scenario: Job interview — describing your proudest project experience.

👉 在練習之前...

先選擇一個專案,想一下:

  1. 專案背景是什麼(情境 Situation)
  2. 你要負責什麼(任務 Task)
  3. 你實際做了哪些事(行動 Action)
  4. 結果如何、帶來什麼價值(成果 Result)
  5. 為什麼這個專案讓你特別有成就感

並且把關鍵字寫下來。

我的關鍵字:

  1. hedging system, broken for 3 years
  2. lead this project
  3. design architecture, assign tasks to other developers
  4. stable, trusted
  5. make the service more reliable, pressure, prove my ability

🎯 開始進行練習

記得把對話錄下來,自己聽一次,想想有哪裡不自然。

🆘 今日救命句

  • 救命句(簡短切入專案):

    One of my proudest projects is…

  • 爭取思考時間:

    Let me think about a good example.

🔑 核心句型

  1. 描述專案背景 (Situation)

    • At that time, our system had performance issues.
    • The company needed a feature to support more users.
  2. 說明你的責任 (Task)

    • I was responsible for improving the API efficiency.
    • My role was to design and implement the backend solution.
  3. 描述行動 (Action)

    • I optimized the database queries and added caching.
    • I worked closely with the frontend team to align the API design.
  4. 展現成果 (Result)

    • As a result, the throughput increased from 600 TPS to over 3,000 TPS.
    • Finally, the project was delivered on time and improved customer satisfaction.
  5. 說明成就感來源 (Why it was meaningful to me)

    • This project was meaningful to me because it proved my solution could scale under real pressure.
    • I felt proud because it directly improved the user experience and business growth.
    • It gave me confidence as an engineer to handle high-stakes challenges.

📝 我的今日反饋

今天我說的很順,只是在完成式的語法上卡卡的。

然後在 feedback 的時候,我發現重音放對位置,差異滿大的。GPT 有示範我說的跟他說的 This project make me proud, because ...,重音放在 Proud 的時候真的很好聽 (X)。

Per-turn Corrections
	1.	You said: “I was be assigned to refactor a hedging system.”
Correction: “I was assigned to refactor a hedging system.”
Alternative: “I was given the task of refactoring a hedging system.”
	2.	You said: “The system have been broken for three years.”
Correction: “The system had been broken for three years.”
Alternative: “It had been out of order for three years.”
	3.	You said: “I met the service more reliable.”
Correction: “I made the service more reliable.”
Alternative: “I improved the service’s reliability.”

Top 3 Patterns
	•	Past Perfect Tense: Remember to use “had been” for something that was true up to a point in the past.
	•	Passive Voice without ‘be’: When using passive, say “I was assigned,” not “I was be assigned.”
	•	Verb Choice: Use “made” instead of “met” when you mean you improved something.

Phrase Pack
	•	“I was assigned to lead the project.”
	•	“The system had been broken for several years.”
	•	“As a result, it became stable and smooth.”
	•	“I was responsible for designing the architecture.”
	•	“This project makes me proud because I proved my ability.”

Intonation Tip

Try emphasizing the word “proud” to show your confidence. For example: “This project makes me proud because I made the service more reliable.”

Fluency & Pronunciation Notes
	•	Good pacing overall; short sentences help.
	•	Watch out for mixing up verbs like “met” vs. “made.”
	•	Your clarity improved each time you repeated the corrected sentence.

Key Focus for Next Time
	1.	Practice using past perfect (“had been”) in a few sentences.
	2.	Focus on passive voice forms (“was assigned”).
	3.	Do a quick two-minute drill: pick three sentences and shadow them, focusing on verb accuracy.

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